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Big to small to Really BIG! 4 years 5 months ago #34

  • mgilmour
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When I was writing Battleframe I wanted to hit the reader with its massive scope straight off. It's a galactic wide struggle that has been going on for thousands of years.....

If I left it at that then where would the story go so I immediately reduced the first act about the struggle of one friend rescuing another from the enemy.

The second act revolves around the characters beginning to get a glimpse into what is happening in the world around them.

The final act is the characters pushing the boundaries of their capabilities.....which really sets everything up for book two.

So what are your thoughts on the plot? I'd be really interested to get some feedback on the pacing......was it exciting and intriguing? Were there some "oh my gosh!" moments that kept you reading? Share your thoughts here....good and bad.....

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